Just some poem I wrote...

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Just some poem I wrote...

by shakeberry @ 2008-05-17 – 01:39:50

The Back of You

Your bitter words have left me broken
The way they made me feel wide open,
I tried to tell you the way things are
Instead you opened up the deep deep scar

We fight and argue but still want more
The intrigued and lust was/is the allure
You cut me deep the worst i’ve had
I feel no joy and i’m hurting bad

I’m selfish, needy and wanted it all
This is and was my biggest downfall
You pushed and pushed and I resist
But you never knew you were truly missed

If you saw my tears you’d understand
I needed you to take my hand
I’m hard to love and loved too hard
My heart is like a broken glass shard

I lost you tonight and feel it raw
I cannot give you me anymore
I wish you wanted me to stay
Instead I’ll watch as you fade away.

By Berry 17th May 2008

It's not the best, but i had to get my words out, and here it is.
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- xmillyxxx ^Pro
- 2008-05-17 @ 01:54:08
Very moving and honest hun. I like it (( hugs)) xxx
- - shakeberry
  - 2008-05-17 @ 01:59:57
  Thanking you ~hugs~ xxxxxx
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- sameold ^Pro
- 2008-05-17 @ 01:56:09
x
- - shakeberry
  - 2008-05-17 @ 02:00:15
  Hey good to see you back xx
  - - sameold ^Pro
    - 2008-05-17 @ 02:10:38
    Hi Hunny,
    
    I haven't blogged for ages, I am going to sleep now babe I will P.M you in the morning and let you know whats going on.
    
    I have read through a few of your posts, you are so lovely & honest - Hope you and your little princess are keeping well -
    
    I will talk to you in the morning, my eyes are bearly open - night night babe - xxx
    - - shakeberry
      - 2008-05-17 @ 09:47:44
      ok, thank you, one day i'll be really happy and look back on the crazy blogs I wrote and think ohhh...why was I so nuts!!
      
      xxxxx
      
      p.s I hope you slept well
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- Raphael
- 2008-05-17 @ 07:51:11
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=orSHFXrC-DY&feature=related

It is so easy to see
Dysfunction between you and me
We must free up these tired souls
Before the sadness gets us both

I tried and tried to let you know
I love you but I'm letting go
It may not last but I don't know
Just don't know

If you don't know
Then you can't care
And I show up
But you're not there
But I'm waiting
And you want to
Still afraid that I will desert you

Everyday
With every word whispered we get more far away
The distance between us makes it so hard to stay
But nothing last forever, but be honest babe
It hurts but it may be the only way

A babe that's warm with memories
Can heal us temporarily
The misbehaving all he makes
The ditch between us so damn deep

Built a wall around my heart
Never let it fall apart
Strangely I wish secretly
It won't fall down while I'm asleep

If you don't know
Then you can't care
And I show up
But you're not there
But I'm waiting
And you want to
Still afraid that I will desert you, babe

Everyday
With every word whispered we get more far away
The distance between us makes it so hard to stay
But nothing last forever, but be honest babe
It hurts but it may be the only way

But we have not hit the ground
Doesn't mean we're not still falling, oh..
I want so bad to pick you up
But you're still too reluctant to accept my help
What a shame I hope you find somewhere to place the blame
But until then the fact remains

Everyday
With every word whispered we get more far away
The distance between us makes it so hard to stay
Nothing last forever, but be honest babe
It hurts but it may be the only way (x2)

-FIN-
- - shakeberry
  - 2008-05-17 @ 09:48:37
  that just said it all...think today I might get away from the net.
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- boredrich
- 2008-05-17 @ 09:56:12
I love that it really does I can feel the pain flowing through the words and the imagry is fantastic HUGS
- - shakeberry
  - 2008-05-17 @ 15:34:06
  Thank you much Rich, I never know if I write crap or not...but it's good to get feedback
  
  ~hugs~
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